Talk:Fortune Shop

Why is everything worded so weirdly on this page? For example, "your human avatar's..." sounds awkward and excessive. "your character's..." or "your avatar's..." would be better. Or "If a human should happen to visit on a day..." could be replaced with "If a player happens to visit on a day..." which is less verbose and less awkward sounding.
 * Hmmm...you're right. The whole section is written badly. I'll change a few words right now and add a rewrite template. Drago   (talk)     Drago PC icon.png 10:56, June 13, 2018 (EDT)