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Welcome!
~SuperHamster Talk Contribs 00:52, February 26, 2024 (EST)
Avoid second-person writing
Hello, I've noticed several of your edits (such as this one) include second-person writing in them (i.e. usage of the words "you" or "your" when referring to the player). Just want to let you know that the Manual of Style states that articles should never be written in the second-person (or first-person, for that matter); in any context that refers to the "player", they must be referred to as such instead of saying "you" or "your".
To give an example, instead of:
- "You must buy 15 items to upgrade Tom Nook's shop."
It should be:
- "The player must buy 15 items to upgrade Tom Nook's shop."
Alternatively, you can avoid referring to the player altogether if applicable. For example:
- "A total of 15 items must be bought to upgrade Tom Nook's shop."
Hope my advice helped. The Jacketed Terrapin 22:55, March 8, 2024 (EST)
Okay I will do that Acnh Player (talk) 23:38, March 8, 2024 (EST)
I will fix the poki article Acnh Player (talk) 14:04, March 9, 2024 (EST)