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This article is coming along very nicely. Keep up the great work! <big>[[User:Red Snapper|<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS;color:darkred">Red</span>]] [[User talk:Red Snapper|<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS;color:red">Snapper</span>]]</big> 12:27, July 15, 2014 (EDT) | This article is coming along very nicely. Keep up the great work! <big>[[User:Red Snapper|<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS;color:darkred">Red</span>]] [[User talk:Red Snapper|<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS;color:red">Snapper</span>]]</big> 12:27, July 15, 2014 (EDT) | ||
| + | :Thank you so much Red for the feedback and encouragement, I really appreciate it! I've made the changes we've discussed, I just have to move some things over to the [[tree]] article. One more thing I would like to suggest is the removal of the picture in the ACNL section of this page showing the cliff as it is pretty much irrelevant to this page. I think that a screenshot of an ACGC town map with the acre notation would be particularly suited, however. I'll try and dig one up. --[[User:Sunmarsh|sunmarsh]] ([[User talk:Sunmarsh|talk]]) 17:43, July 15, 2014 (EDT) | ||
Revision as of 17:43, July 15, 2014
Major revision: 7/15/14
I went through the entire page and reworked it. I removed a lot of convoluted wording and tried to simplify it. One thing that I feel may still need to be removed is the ratio of items found in trees. This info would fit better in on the tree page. Information on cliffs also seems out of place here and may need to be removed. The town map comparison image that I uploaded may also be more appropriate for the town map page. Lastly, it may be valuable to include a section about how to mark acres within one's town (start from the top, the bottom row of acres is 'cut off' by the ocean). Also missing is information on which acres support the growth of cedar, oak and coconut trees. --sunmarsh (talk) 12:05, July 15, 2014 (EDT)
- I'll go through these one by one...
- Yes, the tree and cliff info is sort of unrelated and I have no qualms if you move it to the aforementioned more appropriate pages.
- The image is fine where it is, because the town map page is best for showing images of in-game town maps, rather than the size of them. I think the image would be nice for the town page more, actually.
- As for the additions, well, the marking acres within one's town would fit better in the 'Guide' namespace, but I would approve of seeing information about the growth of cedar, oak and coconut trees added to the article.
This article is coming along very nicely. Keep up the great work! Red Snapper 12:27, July 15, 2014 (EDT)
- Thank you so much Red for the feedback and encouragement, I really appreciate it! I've made the changes we've discussed, I just have to move some things over to the tree article. One more thing I would like to suggest is the removal of the picture in the ACNL section of this page showing the cliff as it is pretty much irrelevant to this page. I think that a screenshot of an ACGC town map with the acre notation would be particularly suited, however. I'll try and dig one up. --sunmarsh (talk) 17:43, July 15, 2014 (EDT)
